Wrapped in Vanity

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[this is the story of byst morrow a 16 year old male teen who knew little about what was going to happen! cut's to byst's friend rem's house watching tv when byst say's]

BYST: "what do you wanna watch rem ?" [he asks]

REM: "i don.t care pick something!" [he said]

BYST: "hmmm... how about spongeglob?" [he asked]

REM:"no!" [he said]

BYST: "what about advance time?" [he asked]

REM: "no!!" [he said]

BYST: "how about twilight then?" [he asked]

REM: "oh god no!!!" [he yelled]

[rem take's the remote from byst and say's]

REM: "ah im getting tired of tv! how's about you?" [he ask byst]

BYST:yeah i kinda see your point... wanna go for drive? [he ask rem]

REM: "why not?" [he said]

BYST: "ok then! let's go!!" [he said while happy

REM: "fine! but let me ask my mom if it's alright hey mom!! me and byst are finna go somewhere! do you want anything!?" [he ask his mom]

JENNY: "no im good! just as long as your back before night time!!" [she said]


REM: "alright then! love you!!" [he said]

BYST: "are you done saying good bye?" [he asked]

REM: "yes i am! thank you for asking! cmon let's go!" [he said in a sarcastic manner]

[rem and byst get up out their chairs walking towards the door when rem said]

REM: wait! [he said]

BYST: what? [he said]

REM: i need to get my wallet! [he said]

BYST: okay make it quick! [he said in a annoyed tone]

"?'/'
[rem goes upstairs to get his wallet when he sees a shadowy figure in his mother's room arguing rem listen to what they are talking about]

NO NAME: it seems you hadn.t proclaim your part in the alliance! [he said angerly at her]

JENNY: well yeah! with my job son and keeping this house clean i just don.t have time to- [she said before getting interrupted]

NO NAME: shut it! because of this i have to kill you! [he said in a angry tone]

JENNY; with what? [she asked]

NO NAME: with two sword's of course! [he said]

JENNY: oh dang!... goodbye rem! [she said while tears are flowing down her face]

REM: no!!!!

[as rem ran into the room to save his mother the shadow figure grabbed rem by the the
throat him he ses]

NO NAME: boy you have no idea who your messing with do you?

REM: why.. do.. you.. want.. to.. kill.. my.. mom..?

NO NAME: like i would tell you that! now madam watch as i chuck your son against the wall!

[the shadowy figure throw's rem against the wall so hard it caused immobility of his entire body unable to do anything but to watch in horror as he saw his mother head getting cut off slicing her in peace's while no name cracking a smile and laughing after the killing he calls the alliance and ses]

NO NAME: it's done! master!

REM: master!?

NO NAME: oh your still alive huh?

[he walk's closer to rem and ses]

NO NAME: since i.m in a good mood ill let you live! but theirs nothing you can do now anyway so whats the point in killing you?

REM: i hope you get skullf#ck!

NO NAME: shut up! b#tch!

[he kick's rem on left side of his ribs and leave out the window because of that kick rem can move again but it was already to late he sees what's left of his mother as tears flow through face he run to tell byst what happen]

BYST: about time! what the hell have you 've been doing?

REM: my mom has been killed! infront of my very own eyes!

BYST: dude... i.m sorry i didn't know

REM: yeah well... hey byst!

BYST: yes!


REM: did you hear any noise's? upstairs?

BYST: yes i did!

REM: you did!? how come you didn't do anything!

BYST: bitch you better sit ass down! before i wack you!

REM:hmmm no i wanna stand!

BYST: for all it's worth i really fell sorry you and your mother but want to go on a driving trip to cheer you up?

REM: ok! just let me clean up my mother!

BYST: i understand take as long as you want!

REM: thanks!

[rem goes into the kitchen to get a trash bag but sees the stove is on and decides to turn it off afraid of the house burning down he walk's upstairs try's not to puke at the smell of a dead pieces of his mother on the floor he pick's them up and throw's the bag out of the window and ses]

REM: mommy you will missed!

[rem walk's into the bathroom to wash his hand's and walk's back down byst ses]

BYST: are you ready to go now?

REM: yes! let us go!

BYST: alright! roadtrip! um... still sorry for your loss!

REM: riiiiiight!

[byst and rem walk out of the house when rem's neighbor mr scoober sees him outside his window he ses ]

MR SCOOBER: hello! rem! how are you?

[rem does not bat an eye at mr scoober him and byst get into the car being in the condition that he is in he allowed byst to drive mr scoober walk's next to rem's car and ses]

MR SCOOBER: hey! im talking to you hello! answer me! what's wrong with him?

BYST: he just bare witness his mother getting killed infront of him!

MR SCOOBER: oh gee! i didn't know...

BYST: well now you know! so shut up and leave already!

[byst drive's away and ses]

BYST; hey rem?

REM; what?

BYST; you wanna go to swamart?

REM; no

BYST; how about the tricer?

REM; no!

BYST; what about...

REM; shut up!! i mean really just shut your mouth up right now! can.t i get any time to think of what i am going to do!?

BYST;.......... hey rem?

REM; what byst? what could you possible want?

BYST; im starving! you want anything from moser's?

REM; yeah! some ribs!

BYST; excellent! i hope we have time to make it to their one day special!

[byst pull up to moser's drive through window put's the car in neutral and ses]


BYST; um yes ill take a zouyburgerr and two box's of rib's!

SERVICE VOICE; your total will be 13 dollars and two cents please pull up to the window!

[byst put's the car on d drive's up to get food the cashier lady give them the bag and ses]

BRITNEY; here's your food! now where's my money?

BYST; ok here you go!

[byst give's britney the money check's to see what's in it and drive's away cut's to the alliance being shown from a top down view as the members kept talking in private until no name showed up and said]

NO NAME; master im back!

LEMMER; good! i have another mission for you! are you ready?

NO NAME; yes sir! master!

LEMMER; i need you to-

[one of his soldier's bust into the room and ses]

SOLDIER; um master lemmer?

LEMMER; yes?

SOLDIER; we sorta have a problem

LEMMER; what wrong!?

SOLDIER; i got report's of one family member not killed by us!

LEMMER; who is it?

SOLDIER; it's somebody named rem

LEMMER; hmmm

NO NAME; oh right! that kid who's mother i killed!

LEMMER; why didn't you kill him to?

NO NAME; there was no point in doing that so why bother?

LEMMER; go back and finish the job!

NO NAME; yes sir! [THE END OF PART ONE!!! WRITTEN BY BFSTALL1]